Thursday, 5 May 2016

Group writing - if I were A soldier

We followed the model "If I were a storm" and wrote as if we were a soldier because lately we have been doing lots of work around ANZAC.
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  1. Anonymous9 May 2016 at 11:24

    realy good work nice . My name is dylan I am from christ the king school

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  2. Anonymous9 May 2016 at 11:25

    Good Job Great Slide presentation about ANZAC

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  3. Anonymous9 May 2016 at 11:27

    great job about soldiers.I am William from Christ the King school

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  4. Anonymous9 May 2016 at 11:27

    great job about soldiers.I am William from Christ the King school

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  5. Anonymous9 May 2016 at 11:40

    Hi my name is laa and the school i go to is ctk.
    I really like how you did all the information.

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  6. Anonymous12 May 2016 at 11:22

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  7. Anonymous12 May 2016 at 11:26

    My name is Paige from Christ the King School. I like how you went more into detail and sorted your work in order
    Thanks
    From,Paige

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  8. Anonymous12 May 2016 at 11:31

    I like how you sorted out your work. My name is Melianna I come from christ the king catholic school

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  9. Anonymous12 May 2016 at 11:32

    Great job I like how you talked about soldiers. My name is George from christ the king.
    Regards George.

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  10. Anonymous13 May 2016 at 13:35

    Hi my name is jacob and I like your if you were a soldier writing

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  11. Anonymous13 May 2016 at 13:41

    Hi I am Lily from Christ the King school. I like your If I were a Soldier writing. Well done!

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  12. Anonymous13 May 2016 at 13:43

    i kodeno reading therete

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  13. Anonymous13 May 2016 at 13:44

    hello my name is taylar from christ the school. I really like your presetation, good job keep it up.

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  14. Anonymous13 May 2016 at 13:48

    Hi my name is Tina and I got to Christ the king.I really like how you describe how you feel like if you were a solider.

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  15. Anonymous13 May 2016 at 13:48

    Hi my name is Tina and I got to Christ the king.I really like how you describe how you feel like if you were a solider.

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  16. Anonymous18 May 2016 at 08:52

    good picture flower

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  17. Anonymous19 May 2016 at 08:52

    Good Job!
    I like how you put lots of words in it!
    And the pictures too!
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  18. Anonymous19 May 2016 at 08:54

    great job!
    I liked all of the pics!
    And some of the writing too!
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  19. Anonymous19 May 2016 at 08:56

    Wow. you really thought about the war. I loved how creative it was. That was awesome. :)

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  20. Anonymous27 May 2016 at 08:59

    Hello, I really love the writing. I like learning about world war 1 it is just so cool to see what happen in the war. The writing was really good it almost painted a picture in my mind. Well Done :)
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  21. Anonymous21 June 2016 at 08:49

    i loved the writing
    keep it up great job

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  22. Anonymous27 July 2016 at 09:20

    Hi my name is Nathan and I go to Kaniere School and I really liked this writing.

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  23. Anonymous27 July 2016 at 09:24

    Hi my name is Raihan and I go to kaniere school I really like your writing keep it up

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  24. Anonymous7 September 2016 at 12:28

    I think it is very sad for the soldiers that died and It was so shocking when
    the soldiers and I really proud of what you wrote for those soldires and if you were a soldier keep your best writing in your brain

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  25. Anonymous7 September 2016 at 12:30

    that was a really amazing story and it was are really intersting

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