Wednesday, May 4, 2016

Group writing - if I were A soldier

We followed the model "If I were a storm" and wrote as if we were a soldier because lately we have been doing lots of work around ANZAC.

25 comments:

  1. realy good work nice . My name is dylan I am from christ the king school

    ReplyDelete
  2. Good Job Great Slide presentation about ANZAC

    ReplyDelete
  3. great job about soldiers.I am William from Christ the King school

    ReplyDelete
  4. great job about soldiers.I am William from Christ the King school

    ReplyDelete
  5. Hi my name is laa and the school i go to is ctk.
    I really like how you did all the information.

    ReplyDelete
  6. This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  7. My name is Paige from Christ the King School. I like how you went more into detail and sorted your work in order
    Thanks
    From,Paige

    ReplyDelete
  8. I like how you sorted out your work. My name is Melianna I come from christ the king catholic school

    ReplyDelete
  9. Great job I like how you talked about soldiers. My name is George from christ the king.
    Regards George.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Hi my name is jacob and I like your if you were a soldier writing

    ReplyDelete
  11. Hi I am Lily from Christ the King school. I like your If I were a Soldier writing. Well done!

    ReplyDelete
  12. hello my name is taylar from christ the school. I really like your presetation, good job keep it up.

    ReplyDelete
  13. Hi my name is Tina and I got to Christ the king.I really like how you describe how you feel like if you were a solider.

    ReplyDelete
  14. Hi my name is Tina and I got to Christ the king.I really like how you describe how you feel like if you were a solider.

    ReplyDelete
  15. Good Job!
    I like how you put lots of words in it!
    And the pictures too!
    Please view my blog at http://shsrobbiee.blogspot.co.nz/

    ReplyDelete
  16. great job!
    I liked all of the pics!
    And some of the writing too!
    please view my blog at http://shsaustinn.blogspot.co.nz/

    ReplyDelete
  17. Wow. you really thought about the war. I loved how creative it was. That was awesome. :)

    ReplyDelete
  18. Hello, I really love the writing. I like learning about world war 1 it is just so cool to see what happen in the war. The writing was really good it almost painted a picture in my mind. Well Done :)
    Can you also check out my blog! Link-http://shsaleshat.blogspot.co.nz/

    ReplyDelete
  19. i loved the writing
    keep it up great job

    ReplyDelete
  20. Hi my name is Nathan and I go to Kaniere School and I really liked this writing.

    ReplyDelete
  21. Hi my name is Raihan and I go to kaniere school I really like your writing keep it up

    ReplyDelete
  22. I think it is very sad for the soldiers that died and It was so shocking when
    the soldiers and I really proud of what you wrote for those soldires and if you were a soldier keep your best writing in your brain

    ReplyDelete
  23. that was a really amazing story and it was are really intersting

    ReplyDelete